CK Lynn

I read a little and it seems really good. Please make this an attachment so it's easier to critique!

Done!

Hi afeefah! Here's the review! (sorry it took so long, I've been having some trouble with my computer.) First of all, I like the concept of this story. But I ...

I liked the idea of the poem, but the way it was executed left me underwhelmed. First, you need to capitalize at the beginning of each sentance. This is a ...

Thanks to everyone who reviewed! I'm now working on the reivsed version.

I like this a lot. I was expecting a clichd, emo poem about lost love, but this really took me by surprise! I think this would flow better, though, if ...

Wow! I have friend who's into tarot, so I understand the symbols, and this was an excellnt usage of those! I especially like the two lines about the priestess and ...

(dang. I thought I had a thread around here somewhere.) Hello! Welcome to my little critique shop! I read a lot of poetry and am pretty good at critiquing it, ...

I really like the way this poem sounds. It has a very nice flow and the words chosen match the solemn-ess of the subject. Also, I usually find something wrong ...

This was pretty good, but you need to expand on your ideas. There's a lot about the secrecy of the question and not much emotion. This poem didn't really make ...

Hello :) Please review Thank you!

I think this would be better suited for the lyrics section. It sounds like more of a song by the Fray than a poem, but that could just be me. ...

This was a very interesting poem. I'm not really sure what it was about, but it had a very nice atmosphere and a lot of good lines. I agree with ...

If I were you, I would change the title. It doesn't portray the emotions of this poem. Really, I was expecting something much less...serious, I guess, and was pleasantly surprised. ...

I liked how this flowed and sounded, but there was something missing. I wish it was a verse or two longer so I could get more of a feel for ...